It looks a very good start!
I'm afraid, though, that You've used wrong template (too small and lacking the watermark in the lower right corner).
yep after seeing it repeatedly,you right,the draught to short,thanks for your opinion
This has already been drawn by Darthpanda but its an impressive start. I've moved it to the beginners thread because all newbies work should really be posted here first. No reflection on the quality of the art, just how things work here. I think you'll be moving to the main section fairly soon.
owh sorry for that Hood,i think after my first uploaded cruiser,i can move to upload here,i'm really sorry,after this i will upload in beginner section