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Clonecommander6454
Post subject: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 7th, 2011, 1:18 pm
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Since the Shipbucket's standard have improved so much, and the details missing in the old drawing, I have decided to redraw a newer version of the Kang Ding Class.
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Better right? Let's compare it to the old drawing:
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Commets are welcome! :)

New Version below, check it out now!


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Post subject: Re: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 7th, 2011, 2:57 pm
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Nice. two small points:

You should reverse the Mk-32 torpedo tubes in the starboard side view and you got the names wrong in the title block. It should read "MConrads & PolluxDeltaSeven & Clonecommander6454"

All in all a fine update.

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Post subject: Re: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 7th, 2011, 4:37 pm
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very nice work indeed, but 2 small points:
- the LW-08 radar's foot is a bit lowered into the mast. you cut some important parts of them as well.
-also, those directors look quite bad, I don't know what they are but isn't there an better part around?

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Post subject: Re: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 7th, 2011, 7:31 pm
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Could use more shading.. everything looks to boxy right now.

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Post subject: Re: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 7th, 2011, 8:25 pm
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Very nice improvement! Specially on the radar. Did you draw the radar yourself or is it from a new parts sheet I haven't seen yet?


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Post subject: Re: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 7th, 2011, 8:28 pm
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don't tell me you have missed the dutch parts sheets for about half an year now :O why do I even do all this work -.-

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Post subject: Re: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 7th, 2011, 11:16 pm
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...and, better looking propellers. Those you have are obsolete ones that really doesn't do the drawing any justice.

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Post subject: Re: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 8th, 2011, 9:18 am
bezobrazov wrote:
...and, better looking propellers. Those you have are obsolete ones that really doesn't do the drawing any justice.
And..Take the new SeaHawk too!


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Post subject: Re: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 8th, 2011, 1:02 pm
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Updated Version
-Castor-2C
-Jupiter II
-Mk.32 SVTT
-Location of Phalanx
-Exhaust
-Mast
-Hull Stabilizer
-Superstructure details
-Underwater hull shading and Rudder
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Looking forward to more comments, propellers will be changed shortly.


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Post subject: Re: Kang Ding (La Fayette) ClassPosted: November 8th, 2011, 2:03 pm
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It is much improved.

Courtesy requires that, if a person wishes to update someone else's drawing, they first get permission from that other person (or at least make an effort to contact them). Did you do so in this case? If not, please do so in the future.


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