http://dl.dropbox.com/u/16140164/Drawin ... 201943.png
the proof that you don't have to use 'newstandard' shading or overly details to get an non-plain looking ship.
also, add railings, cable guides, anchor chains, anchor locks, steampipes, airpipes, pipes in general, mast strengtening, stairs, an corrected period crane, pipes, aerials, and if you want it really good looking, an underwater hull. you seem to have the 'parts' covered (weapons, searchlights, directors) so the design process is done, now you have the actual drawing