Better, but still a bit too static with regards to porthole spacing. Read my last comments one more time, and you might understand what I mean...
I am currently working on the portholes' layout, though it might take a while to figure out...
However, I didn't quite get what you ment by:
Also, being a Scandinavian vessel, I'd suggest creating an Admiral's wardroom/stateroom with cabins aft,with larger shutters on top of the scuttles (you can find multiple examples, again, if you browse through the RL-designs!)
Would that mean something on the far aft, like a sort of big-window-ish piece in the hull, or a small cabin-thingy sticking up 'tween the aft turrets and the funnels? As I didn't quite get what I was supposed to be looking for, it became kind of hard to find any good example...