Shipbucket

Two lifeboats isn't enough. Go for four or five, then maybe add two rafts each at the bow and stern.

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Another thing, have the cranes either all horizontal or all at 45 degrees.

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"If people never did silly things nothing intelligent would ever get done." ~Ludwig Wittgenstein

Ok, I guess I'll lend my five cents to the bucket:

The funnels doesn't look, let's say, "merchant"-like. They're too thick, and quite frankly odd-looking. They're also way too closely spaced together!

Only two masts with cranes? For this time-period vessel and size, I'd expect, at least three masts and several cranes inbetween! Look at the various merchant ships already drawn at SB!

The bridge lacks bridge-wings. It also lacks every fundamental equipment to make it look like a bridge!

There's no access whatsoever to the lifeboats provided, since there are no doors or hatches on the 'tween superstructure!

The hull needs a lot of details, such as anchor hawses with anchors, bollards, and mooring gears. Also, quite possibly, since this appears to be a welter-deck design, you'd need scuppers on the upper deck to drain the upper deck from sea water.

These are just a few of the most obvious points that I've seen. There are others, but better stop here and give you, APDAF, a chance to catch up!

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If you adjust the deck layout, you could have 3 or 4 masts on deck, this makes loading and unloading quicker and more effecient, which means you can get out to sea faster, which means you can deliver your cargo faster, which means you deliver more goods and turn a bigger profit.

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"If people never did silly things nothing intelligent would ever get done." ~Ludwig Wittgenstein

This seems to become one of these well known APDAF-threads: one unspeakable drawing at the beginning, several pages of hints and good advices, some dumb questions in between and finally no accetable or simply no drawing. Sure, my comment is not constructive but my frustration about this wants to come out somehow.

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go on playing dead

I need a hand with her.

No! This is it! We have all tried to help you, but I think everyone here agrees that the line is drawn at actually also doing the work for you! If you cannot somehow understand what we're trying to tell you I don't know what more we can do! So, APDAF, I'm afraid you're on your own here...

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An illustrated tutorial as to what needs doing. This is all I will do to help you fix it. You need to stop asking others to fix your mistakes for you and take the initiative to do it yourself.

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"If people never did silly things nothing intelligent would ever get done." ~Ludwig Wittgenstein

yea Okay, though I don't agree with the comment of the cranes.

Updated.

I will work on the boxyness later.