Posts:5376 Joined: July 27th, 2010, 3:02 am
Location: Aalborg, Denmark
The text should read:
Norway, Storm Class
P960 Storm
Year-year
Other than that, very nice
Also, the second drawing has a different pt-number on the hull than in the text.
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Posts:4714 Joined: July 27th, 2010, 5:10 am
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if you use different hull color than grey, then the railing and assorted colors should also match that main color, expecially when they are facing sturctures.
Also, the drawings itself could be improved. The lines in the hulls doesen't look that good, neither does the darker shade lines in superstructure edges. If you want to shade the roundness of the pilothouses, then I suggest using ligther shade than the actuall color is, not darker (I posted an example of this in the guideline thread)
Posts:5376 Joined: July 27th, 2010, 3:02 am
Location: Aalborg, Denmark
And for those who doesn't speak Norwegian: Came to the conclusion that McConrads Hauk is a little low.
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