I have a few comments....
- if you go for shading for the angled surfaces, I would go for lighter grey forward and darker aft, instead of both dark.
I was looking at the rules again, and it mentions only two shades of grey. The Hull and the super structure, as well the example drawing is using that rule. I like the way you say to do it, and I have changed it to that standard. my only question would be is it "legal"?
also, take a look where to use grey and where black lines, less then 90 degrees turns are represented by grey lines in shipbucket style.
This sounds like it should be elementary, and I hate to sound confused....but...are you saying any line that is straight vertical or horizontal should be black, and any line with angle should be grey? Again, I like the way you stated and I'm changing mine because that looks better. But it's left me wondering if it's "legal" and it's not that way on the example drawing. As an after thought, the rules say that all outer edges must be black. So if I'm coloring an angle line grey and it becomes an outer line, do I go to black again? I have done that to my drawing now and I'm not quite sure its right.
- you might want to take parts from this slightly updated drawing of the burke instead of the older ones (notably bridge, phalanx positions and the mast have been much improved)
you didn't post a link, and all the Burkes I've looked at have the same mast
- I would suggest looking for another RAM position, the current one is very limited in firing angle.
I haven't drawn it yet, but that sits on an overhanging platform that gets it out there farther. I still don't know if it's far enough, but it looks right in my photo-real pictures
- SPS-49 was not really an back up, but the SPY-1 was at first not used as search radar. only from the burke version onward this was the case, IIRC.
I have a buddy that is a SPY-1 instructor at Dahlgren. He and I (we were both FC's in the Navy) are wondering what you mean by the SPY-1 was not used as a search radar. We can get into that later, but I will have the SPS-49 on mine. I have plenty of room, it just make sense in a battle damage way of thinking, and I like the 440 mile early warning capability.
- the propellers seem a bit on the small side.
I used the screws from the Long Beach, and I thought they would be big enough. But for now I am looking into a whole different set-up in this area
- the hangar height might be a tad low, I suggest lowering the helideck to VLS deck level.
In my latest version, I have raised the helo hanger a bit, moved the (don't know what to call this, the place where the guys sits and directs the helos in) to the starboard side so I could get bushmasters on both sides aft
- the bow seems a tad long, you might be able to loose some length by cutting that by about 10-20 meters without loosing any capabilities
ooh NO! Call it the Virginian in me (I served aboard the Virginia) but I find that long bow absolutely gorgeous
it also leaves me room for expansion.
I am wondering why you would go nuclear electric, it might be a tad better for the turbines but your power efficiency is lower..... care to explain the reason for this?
Electric is more efficient and costs less than steam turbine. And it's a lot quieter than turbines and reduction gears. Here's a good read on the subject
http://www05.abb.com/global/scot/scot21 ... f%2004.pdf
and this, very interesting stuff
http://digital.library.unt.edu/ark:/675 ... 0Jul31.pdf
- it might just be me, but have you shortened the height of the phalanxes or something? they look off.
fixed
- I also think this ship is a tad oversized, the CSGN's were all between 12000 and 18000 (except for one note of the Mk 2, but that is flight deck version, this would have been 25000 tons) where yours would be 18000...... I see no reason why this ship would go over the long beach's displacement, as her arnament would actually be lighter, her specifications similar and her requirements similar as well.....
I'm sorry now that I posted the 23,000 ton number. I was just using the second option in the CG(X) study. Not sure on displacement as of now, but I'll figure it out eventually
Thank you for your suggestions Mr. acelanceloet and please keep them coming. I find it very helpful
Fair Seas shipmate
Joe