I had the idea that this launcher is angled in two directions, not only forward, but also out. the tubes look also not entirely round.... may I do some modifications or do you want to do them yourself, Judah?
If you look closely at the cell covers on the original drawing (the one from Northrop Grumman), you would notice that the VLS cells are angled towards the port and starboard sides of the ship. The VLS cells on the Eject Launch Module are angled outward only, not forward. The Modular Launch System (from the same .pdf) has cells that are angled forward.
ah, I see, that puzzled me then.
I would still like to see the drawing a bit changed though, defining the construction and the tubes (you now have some mix of both) and the tubes separated by black lines (you did that now on only one of them) and some shading to show the tubes are round, and not square as in the Mk 41. also, the black blob hatch in the front view would have some use for an grey pixel between the hatches, as on my Mk 41. those were the changes I myself would make, if you don't want to do it yourself