Welcome on board, and sorry for being late in welcoming you. From the first drawing to the last you seem to have made some remarkable progress, which is good. However I would like to point out some things regarding your work so far.
* Hull lines, those especially, under water usually are not shown. Rule of thumb is if you see it in real life ship at the same size of a SB scale drawing than you can show it on the drawing.
* There should be also a lot less lines as seen in the reference pictures you have provided.
* The funnel looks wrong, as in the pictures there is no thicker part in the middle of the funnel. These are bracing for the wires which support the funnel
* You have missed the small boat on davits just in front of the bridge
* From the photographs it seems that there are portholes on the forecastle, and there are at least three portholes on the stern, just below the aft gun.
* Try to use a different propeller as the one currently used looks too modern.
* It is my belief that your ensign is too big.
I hope these remarks will help in making your drawing a fitting one for the next upload session.
Thanks for your feedback but there are some points i'd like to discuss:
-Hull lines: Some people told me to tone them down, some others nothing and now you tell me to erase them?. I already toned them down and, IMO they are right because they contribute to give a feeling of relief on the hull.
-Lines: I can count up to six in the photo and 5 in the drawing (without counting the underwater ones) if any, there should be one more line in the drawing.
-Funnel: the funnel was leaning towards stern that's why it's like that. And there's not any thicker part in the funnel at all, there's a wider part which must be there. This ship had no wires supporting the funnel.
-The boat on davits is already there, check it again. It's not lifted though.
-Portholes on forecastle added.
-Propellers: That was the only fitting one from the templates sheet. The other ones were either too small or too big.
-Ensign: I took the naval ensign from the drawing of Jaime I
here, but i don't how to make it smaller without screwing it completely.