Shipbucket

Here is the updated version:

I've tried to fix all the things that have been pointed out. Knowing for sure that these ships were built with British assistance I assumed they used British guns as well so I took those from the Royal Navy weapon sheet (appropriate calibers and time period of course). Also there are larger portholes, less single black pixel lines, searchlights facing the right side etc.
Is there anything else that needs improvement?

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Worklist: Portuguese Navy and Barnegat class seaplane tenders

She looks good to me; the only thing (from a quick scan) I would suggest is to darken the cross bracing under the bridge platforms; generally we use black for stand-alone structures, but can get away with a darker grey where there is a surface behind. But yes, this is a fine looking little ship, and a welcome addition of a lesser known type.

Looks pretty good to me. This guy has some natural talent for sure. Can't wait to see more work and at least he seems to choose lesser known subjects to draw too. Great stuff.

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Hood's Worklist
English Electric Canberra FD
Interwar RN Capital Ships
Super-Darings
Never-Were British Aircraft

Great stuff indeed. Looks quite right.
Hope to see more.

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Thank you Kim for the crest

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