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Sad fate that the poor Cabot could not be saved

Yes, very sad.
YE blacked.


Fred

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R, Mod R, K, Beagle, Acorn class DD's

I'm going to request that for the version you submit for upload that you don't show it being bombed, as that is one of the things that is generally against the rules.

That said, the rest of the drawing still looks great, and with the above change I would love to eventually place it in the archive.

Pre-post edit:

The credit line should go:

USA, CVL Independence Class
CVL-23 USS Princeton
(Youboat)

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Fair enough. Done.



Fred

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What's the diffrence betwin your early and late drawings? 1 gun less?

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Almost youboat, almost. You need to move shipbucket logo in proper position, just copy that from standard template and paste. Remove that small v2.2 note. Also you use non standard template in terms of width, I understand thats because CVL is a bit longer that L3 template. We need to ask moderati if that non-standard STT is ok or no, if no then you will need to put ship in larger template for main site upload.

Overall pretty good job, for a newbie.

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Besides the above Fred, you should use the credits tip given to you by TimothyC, and not the way you posted.

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Thank you Kim for the crest

"Never fear to try on something new. Remember that the Titanic was built by professionals, and the Ark by an amateur"

Templates changed, version gone. Is there an accepted version note somewhere, with newer and older drawings of the same class it gets a tad confusing.


Bow, and stern 20mm's were removed and 2 relocated to the forward gallery and radars changed and relocated on the island.
Fred

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In the works CURRENT
WW1 RN Chatham, Emerald
R, Mod R, K, Beagle, Acorn class DD's

You should be drawing a single ship as it appeared during a certain year.

Take for instance:

http://shipbucket.com/Real%20Designs/Un ... 201943.png
http://shipbucket.com/Real%20Designs/Un ... 201944.png
http://shipbucket.com/Real%20Designs/Un ... 201945.png

Three drawings of the Baltimore during 1943, 1944, and 1945 to show her different configurations and camouflage schemes. If I were you I'd choose a single ship of the Independence class and work with that one solely. If you want to do other configurations, pick a ship that shows it and go with that.

Hope that helps.

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Yes it does. Thanks Colosseum.
Fed

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In the works CURRENT
WW1 RN Chatham, Emerald
R, Mod R, K, Beagle, Acorn class DD's