Posts:7510 Joined: July 28th, 2010, 12:25 pm
Location: the netherlands
few comments:
too many turrets
turrets look wrong
prop guard must be placed slightly aft
shading must be added to make it shipbucket scale
those are the most obvious ones IMO, when you have fixed all this other members might take a look at it, I am not that experienced with ships of this time era
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I'm not quite sure why you removed all the details I had added to this already-ugly ship. At any rate, you should read through the guidelines on how to properly shade, color, etc. It will make this modification look much better.
Posts:582 Joined: August 17th, 2010, 7:45 am
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Ah, you added radar and some details. Good so far. But I still miss the very usual 2,5cm-triples. And it could use some more directors for the aa.
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