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K-Jag
Post subject: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 3rd, 2010, 2:27 pm
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Hello

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It based on the Original Agano.

10 x 2 =10 cm/65 (3.9") Type 98
17 x 3 = 25 mm/60 (1") Type 96 Model 1

No Torpedos or Aircrafts

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Colombamike
Post subject: Re: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 3rd, 2010, 4:21 pm
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Poor arc of fire for mid/aft 100mm turrets
Better to use a "Atlanta" main weapons disposition...
Likely 3 turret forward and 3 aft


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Post subject: Re: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 3rd, 2010, 11:13 pm
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It just does not look up to Shipbucket standards. I suggest reviewing the Shipbucket style guide for shading and coloring options.


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K-Jag
Post subject: Re: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 4th, 2010, 11:49 am
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here are the second:

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10 x 2 =10 cm/65 (3.9") Type 98
23 x 3 = 25 mm/60 (1") Type 96 Model 1

maybe the Agano needs ballast it tooks ben a littel bit Top-Heavy

The colours are the same as Coloseum

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Post subject: Re: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 4th, 2010, 4:01 pm
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few comments:
too many turrets
turrets look wrong
prop guard must be placed slightly aft
shading must be added to make it shipbucket scale

those are the most obvious ones IMO, when you have fixed all this other members might take a look at it, I am not that experienced with ships of this time era

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Post subject: Re: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 4th, 2010, 6:11 pm
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I'm not quite sure why you removed all the details I had added to this already-ugly ship. At any rate, you should read through the guidelines on how to properly shade, color, etc. It will make this modification look much better.

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K-Jag
Post subject: Re: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 5th, 2010, 9:26 am
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Here are the third one

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9 x 2 =10 cm/65 (3.9") Type 98
20 x 3 = 25 mm/60 (1") Type 96 Model 1

I hope that is better than the others

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Colombamike
Post subject: Re: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 5th, 2010, 7:44 pm
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K-Jag
Post subject: Re: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 12th, 2010, 1:20 pm
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Here are the next version:

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The position of the turrets are inspiriert from the "Atlanta" and the "Oyodo" classes

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Post subject: Re: CLAA Agano ClassPosted: November 15th, 2010, 9:11 am
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Ah, you added radar and some details. Good so far. But I still miss the very usual 2,5cm-triples. And it could use some more directors for the aa.

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