Umm ... that Majestic class seems a bit, well, enthusiastic, with the liberal use of VLS tubes. A few dozen too many in fact. One hit and that ship goes up like a roman candle. You may want to rethink that entire design, honestly.
I know it's gonna go up in a massive conflagration if hit, but whence then is the fun being all protected? This is for rp-purposes, and assumption is that one Majestic is never going to travel alone, nor without ability to handle two dozen incoming Moskits without serious issues. Furthermore, we could sit here and discuss the utility of other arsenal ships, but that's aint the point right?
There is also the issue of those -whatever they are- on top of and to either side of the bridge. Do you really want that much magazine space taking up room
your control spaces? Those have got to go. Seriously.