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I have done an quite similar ship, with similar paintjob for the dutch navy
http://www.shipbucket.com/images.php?di ... ydeman.png
http://www.shipmotions.nl/Loopbaan/Labo ... ydeman.jpg
http://www.shipbucket.com/Real%20Design ... YSKENS.png
http://www.maritiemdigitaal.nl/wwwopacx ... &width=350
the solutions I chose here might help you out going for an slightly darker colour then pure white helps a lot (just imagine the ship when it is in the shadows and pick the colours from that.
the shading is a lot better here, but some parts still need some work IMO. (for example the bridge wings)
at the waterline something weird is happening with the hull shape.

great work other then that

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Good looking vessel Rifleman Won't comment on the shading and shadowing issue. You've already got competent comments
@Rodondo: I got it in my "to-do-archive", so in this case I've just made it

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DD County Class PNS Babur (1982)(PAK)
FF Type 21 Class D182 PNS Babur (2000)(PAK)
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I've had a closer look at the newest version, but I have to say there is still a lot of minor errors that detract from what is otherwise a most excellent drawing. I'm going to back off here as to pursue this would mean me having to give a very detailed list and then enter into a discussion, but as an example of what I'm refering to you have a very light grey colour in the aft deck area under the heli deck, in what should be a clear space, and that is only one example. The thing is, we have to take a lot of pains in the nitty gritty detail, and this drawing deserves the best.

Cheers PB trying to sort out some of the issues at min

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Very smart drawing Rifleman.Perhaps a bit of highlight on the funnel ? Shading and highlighting is a nightmare on a white ship,but keep at it.

Thanks to Portsmouth Bill and Bombhead finally complete.

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