Shipbucket

Have need more time because of my health siuation.
Well, here is it now. Hope you like it. Enjoy!

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Looks good to me mate.

I'm sorry but this is just not good enough. I know you are a new drawer but you will need to add more detail, shading, etc for this to be "up to snuff". It has a sloppy feeling to it.

From the way the drawing is presented I don't get the feeling that you really "know" what you're looking at but have rather just traced lines on a drawing which is NOT ACCEPTABLE.

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USN components, camouflage colors, & reference links (World War II only)

yeah it needs more improvement but take care of your health first as you said

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Verusea Alternative Universe is starting to build up.

An excellent start, but shading!

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Work list(Current)
Miscellaneous|Victorian Colonial Navy|Murray Riverboats|Colony of Victoria AU|Project Sail-fixing SB's sail shortage
How to mentally pronounce my usernameRow-(as in a boat)Don-(as in the short form of Donald)Dough-(bread)
"Loitering on the High Seas" (Named after the good ship Rodondo)
There's no such thing as "nothing left to draw" If you can down 10 pints and draw, you're doing alright by my standards

Better?

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under the B turret, the lines are not correct:

Thanks Heuhen.

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This is the Oakland class???

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The hull number needs to be larger on the bow, check navsource.