Not bad, however there's still room for improvement.
- You're missing the black waterline
- Sailing ships have straight keels. They can be horizontal or sloping from the bow and down the the stern (Also known as the heel) The curve you've drawn now would indicate that the keel is sagging or maybe even broken.
- The yards and the shrouds don't line up. If you want to show the yards on the starboard side then they have to be on the outside of the shrouds.
- The bow is very blunt for a ship from the 1840ies.
- By this time the ornamental bow had pretty much disappeared, especially on vessels like this.
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