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MK83Spot
Post subject: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 8th, 2012, 12:56 am
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nighthunter
Post subject: Re: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 8th, 2012, 5:30 am
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Nice work, but, they need to be on separate templates and proper label placements. Keep up the good work!

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Post subject: Re: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 8th, 2012, 7:36 am
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Nighthunter has made good points,

I'd like to add to that, with the critique that the hull is a bit too dark to make out the details properly

Other than that, fine drawing

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Post subject: Re: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 8th, 2012, 7:55 am
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Post subject: Re: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 8th, 2012, 8:21 am
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Welcome aboard and a nice first drawing.

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Post subject: Re: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 8th, 2012, 8:26 am
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Welcome to the forums.
I too will recommend that you lighten the colours somewhat since right now it's very hard to see any details at all without zooming.

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Post subject: Re: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 8th, 2012, 8:41 am
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And of course dont use attachments.

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Post subject: Re: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 8th, 2012, 8:47 am
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Welcome! It's a fine drawing.
The Dolphin AIP is base on U214 design which derives from a mix between U208 and U212. Here is the U212 for comparison

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and a more updated one

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Post subject: Re: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 8th, 2012, 8:53 am
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Yes, welcome aboard, and again yes, please try not to use attachments, but an image host, Photobucket is one, but I know other members have better alternatives. I'm also moving you to beginner's, not as a reflection on your welcome contribution, but out of policy, we expect you'll soon graduate :)


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Post subject: Re: Dolphin AIP Class (Israeli Navy)Posted: March 9th, 2012, 12:32 pm
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