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The bow looks rather weird compared to a yacht. The bow feels like converting traditional battleship bow to a raked bow.

I'm not the one who said it needed it. follow the quotes better

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Why so many doors on the stern gallery? Surely there are too many

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Get over it guys, radar wasn't around in 1921.

Generally its an improvement, not perfect but a solid basis for further work. The funnels do need raising.

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UPDATED:

-Raised the funnels
-Changed Stern walk doors.

why not just 2 bigger funnels? of this height and the same diameter as you have with 4 now.... IMO a bit angled would look the best.

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Added basic funeral livery.

Comments welcome.

I agree with ace. Make it into 2 big funnels, and angle them back a little.

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Why?

They would only take up cabin space.