Moderator: Community Manager
[Post Reply] [*]  Page 1 of 2  [ 19 posts ]  Go to page 1 2 »
Author Message
ALVAMA
Post subject: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 3:00 pm
[ img ]


Last edited by ALVAMA on February 23rd, 2012, 5:17 pm, edited 2 times in total.

Top
[Quote]
Colosseum
Post subject: Re: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 3:10 pm
Offline
Posts: 5218
Joined: July 26th, 2010, 9:38 pm
Location: Austin, TX
Contact: Website
As always, quite excellent art-wise but sadly lacking in some details. I think you need to spend more time thoroughly researching your ships before you just leap into drawing. I'd also like to see an evolution so to speak -- just drawing the ship as it appears in 1945 does not (in my opinion cut it).

Your Kingfishers are not sitting on any catapult pedestals but rather floating in midair. :P

The radar fit for this ship is also incorrect in some places - notably you are missing SG surface search sets and FD Mark 3 fire control radar above the foremast. As always, you can find good reference at NavSource, especially for famous ships like BB-35.

This one will need to be absolutely perfect in my eyes before I am ready to sign off on it!

All that said, I applaud your effort and am glad to see someone else drawing USN designs of WWII! :)

_________________
USN components, camouflage colors, & reference links (World War II only)


Last edited by Colosseum on February 23rd, 2012, 3:12 pm, edited 1 time in total.

Top
[Profile] [Quote]
ALVAMA
Post subject: Re: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 3:11 pm
Okay fill fix!


Top
[Quote]
Colosseum
Post subject: Re: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 3:12 pm
Offline
Posts: 5218
Joined: July 26th, 2010, 9:38 pm
Location: Austin, TX
Contact: Website
(I edited my above post, please make sure to read it!)

_________________
USN components, camouflage colors, & reference links (World War II only)


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
Wolfman
Post subject: Re: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 3:16 pm
Offline
Posts: 254
Joined: July 26th, 2011, 6:48 pm
It's about time somebody got around to working on the last first generation dreadnought battleship left in the world.


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
ALVAMA
Post subject: Re: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 3:29 pm
I fixed the plane! About the raders yes you are right, but also I did add those radars, but my means my reference drawing didn't show them properly, since I know the names I have fixed them with your ones!


Top
[Quote]
Wolfman
Post subject: Re: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 3:55 pm
Offline
Posts: 254
Joined: July 26th, 2011, 6:48 pm
It's looking much better, now, ALVAMA.


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
Colosseum
Post subject: Re: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 4:20 pm
Offline
Posts: 5218
Joined: July 26th, 2010, 9:38 pm
Location: Austin, TX
Contact: Website
I'll help with the radars, but I can't guarantee I can really do anything until next Monday. :)

_________________
USN components, camouflage colors, & reference links (World War II only)


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
ALVAMA
Post subject: Re: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 4:30 pm
Colosseum wrote:
I'll help with the radars, but I can't guarantee I can really do anything until next Monday. :)
No problem!


Top
[Quote]
nighthunter
Post subject: Re: USS TexasPosted: February 23rd, 2012, 4:47 pm
Offline
Posts: 1971
Joined: July 27th, 2010, 8:33 pm
Alvama, your Kingfishers are too low now. they need to sit on the catapult, two pixels above where you have them. Nice work though.

_________________
"It is better to type nothing and be assumed an ass, than to type something and remove all doubt." - Me


Top
[Profile] [Quote]
Display: Sort by: Direction:
[Post Reply]  Page 1 of 2  [ 19 posts ]  Return to “Real Designs” | Go to page 1 2 »

Jump to: 

Who is online

Users browsing this forum: No registered users and 19 guests


The team | Delete all board cookies | All times are UTC


cron
Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Limited
[ GZIP: Off ]