As always, quite excellent art-wise but sadly lacking in some details. I think you need to spend more time thoroughly researching your ships before you just leap into drawing. I'd also like to see an evolution so to speak -- just drawing the ship as it appears in 1945 does not (in my opinion cut it).
Your Kingfishers are not sitting on any catapult pedestals but rather floating in midair.
The radar fit for this ship is also incorrect in some places - notably you are missing SG surface search sets and FD Mark 3 fire control radar above the foremast. As always, you can find good reference at
NavSource, especially for famous ships like BB-35.
This one will need to be absolutely perfect in my eyes before I am ready to sign off on it!
All that said, I applaud your effort and am glad to see someone else drawing USN designs of WWII!