Yes! One of my favourite ships; much maligned. Even E.H.H. Archibald denigrated her as 'Rearguard'....'a new battleship with her great-aunts teeth'. In fact she had a superb hull, the best of her generation. And re the 'teeth' they were one of the best all-round guns for reliability (more than we can say for more modern mounts) and they had been upgraded for greater reach. Of course she was too expensive for a bankrupt GB, so she earned her notoreity as the floating gin palace.
And I'm amazed! You can't have just dashed this off!!!
I haven't had time yet to study her in detail, but you've got the hull right - good stuff