She looks very top heavy.
She look too short and squat.
To approach SB standards you will need to place credits (in the correct fashion) at the top right of the drawing. The scale bar goes aove the drawing, and the "artwork" you have on the left should be removed or re-located to the right (if it is the ship's badge)
All the information can be written down in the thread or you should make a
B-side
A look at the archive wwill give you some idea on how to go about it.
Any way, not to discourage a new member I wellcome you aboard.
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Thank you Kim for the crest
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