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ezgo394, no credits needed, indeed what Ace said

Ok, just making sure .

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I hope the dante is now really finished. please comment on it if it's not.

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There's a few things on the second drawing that looks like leftovers from an earlier version.
Starting from the bow:
There's an odd black thing just in front of the midship lifeboat, there's a thing that looks like a boat between the aft stacks and the third gun from the bow. It lacks a bit of outline and should be visible through the railings. The stern-most lifeboats looks like it has two very davits floating in the air next to it.
And there's an error in the "title"

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indeed, you are right, there is an layer on which should be deleted underneath it... I will fix it immediately.

EDIT: fixed

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You might want to touch up on the hull a little. The outline seems a bit shaky. Not as bad as the first version you posted, but it's still there.
Also, the two small life boats could do with some work as well.

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The life boats are fine, they need to be like this!

I'll try as soon as possible to post a profile that I recently found on an old book.
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Good ameliorations !

Greetings.

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It certainly is a good improvment on your first try of that ship.

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