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Prizyetsa
Post subject: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 7:24 pm
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So, this is the Håland class LPD designed for, you guessed it, NS. So yeah... Unleash the hounds ;)

Again, please write down any thoughts that cross your mind ^^

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Post subject: Re: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 7:26 pm
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The part of the hull that rises behind the aft controll deck is only present on the sides. In other words, there is no middle to it so that the controllers can see onto the main deck. Same goes for the rise above the stern.

Just thought I'd clear that up :)

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Post subject: Re: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 7:31 pm
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a few things:
where are your funnels?
you miss air defence, all guns you have on board now are for attacking close in surface targets
both your deck space and your space 'inside' are very limited due to the way you set things up. I suggest you take a look at real LPD's, for examples the dutch enforcer series I drew.

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Post subject: Re: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 7:47 pm
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Good job Prizyetsa! I like the bow. You can also try to put more solid colums between the windows, can't wait to see what you will do!


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Post subject: Re: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 8:35 pm
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Okidoki, heres she is.
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added the Sea Sparrow sytem.
extended the hanger space.
the exhaust is in the second tower...

sorry for the horrible typing, im eating pizza in one hand and typing with the other... ;)

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Post subject: Re: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 8:49 pm
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the funnel is too narrow and too high, IMO, but it could be done. in air defence I meant something like an CIWS, although sea sparrow is an possibility. you don't need 2 launchers though, the MK29 you have forward is enough.

your helideck is now rather small though, especially with that elevated part aft.....
as said, look at real designed or never build ship how things should look.

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Post subject: Re: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 9:03 pm
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The turrets are CIWS accoriding to the parts sheet... I can swap them outh tho, but I dont like the way goalkeeper or phallanx looks... I guess I'll go with millenium then :P

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Post subject: Re: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 9:05 pm
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well, the parts sheet is a bit wrong in that, you are right. it should be 'CIWS and small guns'
EDIT: anyways, take a look here.... viewtopic.php?f=13&t=996

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Post subject: Re: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 9:07 pm
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How about now? Te gusta? ;)

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Post subject: Re: Second Ship (LPD)Posted: July 1st, 2011, 9:10 pm
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much better. now I only think that your crane and liferafts are in weird positions
- liferafts: spread them over the ship. so a few aft, a few forward and some on the upper deck or something.
- the crane: is in a good position, but one problem: the superstructure is in it's way. you understand why?

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