MS Intti

Looks pretty good. Apart from comments made above, you also forgot the navigation light.

Looking good. All it needs now is a light touch of shading. A single line of darker grey along the bottom of the hull should do it.

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Cute little thing.
A few points:

I would drop the dark grey out from the deck-edge, or lower it by two pixel (leaving one "white" between the black edge)
The funnel is currently Pitch black, Color it rather with really dark grey instead (and use a notch ligther shade to give it the round affect on shading)
There are some odd darg-grey pixels (proparly a file-transfer errors) in the rudder
The war-ensign is propably bit out of place despite the "war like" name

I would make the portholes in the bow two four pixel wide but retain the three pixel heigth, that way they actually look little bit better as round objects
Also, i would draw the Lines in the hull with two pixels so that place one line with one notch ligther than the hull color above and another line bit darker bellow.

In the deckhouse, It could look better when the railing color abrest the brown surfaces would be also brown (make them two notch darker than the brown you use on the walls). Also, a bit of shaddowing bellow the roof would crown the thing, there I suggest simple two lines of the one notch darker shade from the brown used on the walls (and perhaps make similar adjustment from the window color to add with the shaddow)

Thanks again for comments and guidance. How about now? Hope I got those correctly. Now I'm quite happy I didn't start my "real life-career" with some bigger ship

And yes, this isn't really a warship...But wasen't it participating in our civil war? Nevertheless, I won't dare to attach any MGs on it...

Edit: Updated according to chief's remarks. So this case is closed... ( eli vyötä syöttimeen ja eteenpäin)

It looks much better now, thougth now you have outlined the funnel with dark grey. The outlines should always remain black.
Also the underwater hull still misses its shade
...and the flag still has shallow tongues in its tail

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