Posts:7510 Joined: July 28th, 2010, 12:25 pm
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Nice work! Just a few minor points:
- I am not sure this thread should be called cruise liners, cruise ships would fit better
- There seems to be inconsistency in the use over overhang shading, on the bow the shading seems shipbucket standard but the rest of the ship seems to have no overhang shading.
- I don't think the shading line on the bow should have a grey line (which suggests a hard chine, which is not visible on pictures of these ships)
- I would put "Bermuda, Venture class, Azura" and "Bermuda, Crown class, Emerald Princess" on the ship name line on the template.
- The anchor, bilge keels is missing any outlines
- How does the logo on the Emerald Princess's funnel work? Because it has no black outline, it looks as if it is something that is not really there.
- Are you sure the Azura and Emerald Princess have the exact same arrangement of everything, including radars, antenna's, satcoms, tenders, lifeboats?
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Responding to Acelanceloet.
1) Just fixed it now
2) Now im going to go over the overhang shading and double check so I can make some adjustments.
3) Just fixed it for 1 ship so far. When I look at it now I can see that it looks better so thanks for pointing that out.
4) I will be putting them on one template now.
5) I did not want to add a black outline as since the funnel has lots of black lines on it, it would have made the funnel contain lots of "Heavy corners"
6) Yeah i looked at multiple photos of both the three ships and all radars, doors, Lifeboats etc are all the same
Responding to Heuhen
-Sounds good. Il go over the drawing