Mogami class
Not often I see the bulb being longer the bow, But I do think the bulb is either as long as the bow or just short of the bow, but not impossible for it being longer, I have seen tons off picture off them. The Mogami class is a bit interesting ship, with some clever things. Specially the Electronic warfare mast!
But the drawing is missing the stabilization fin, I can understand why you didn't draw them, since it's not visible on dock-pictures. But that is most likely due to them being retractable.
Not the best drawing but it give an ide of plasement of stabilization fines (and Japanese models, tends to be accurate)
For the archive, people will also take you on that you antennas that are 3px thick, isn't drawn with a black outline.
You are also missing the anchor hatch, I know they have one on the port side (they have managed to get it relay smooth with the hull!), I haven't seen if they have on starboard side (you have to check that), would be weird if they didn't, specially since Japanese sailors love to use the anchor when docking and leaving ports (mainly on weather harden docks).