I have to admit I am with eswube on at least some of the points made here.
- Shipbucket is an artform that describes things not always exactly as they are, but how they look. on similarly sized drawings (for example
http://shipbucket.com/drawings/3343) a 3 pixel mast seems to work fine, so let's not just shut down these comments but discuss why it looked too thick.
- If PT boats did not have funnels, and this is similar in size and/or role to those, why does this have a funnel? If the ship has a steam plant, which could be an explanation for the funnel, it means this ship is rather heavy and probably relatively slow compared to the 'common' PT boats or even destroyers. She seems similar in length to the german Schnellboot's but her far higher profile suggests a larger beam and lower speed. I am not sure if that was intentional? She reminds me a lot of the postwar small submarine chasers which had a top speed of about 16 knots
http://shipbucket.com/drawings/3356
- The bigger MTB's got, the slower they usually were (look at the german Schnellboot types again) and this looks big even for them. What is the task these large MTB's were going to do?
- Look at other recent shipbucket drawings or even at pictures of real ships how depth charges are stored. Right now they look to be lying on top of the rails without any support or fastening, waiting for the first wave to push them overboard.
- There are plenty of details that could fill a ship drawing this size. Foldable railings, mooring gear, deck winches, the anchor, doors to get inside the pilothouse, stairs to get to the light on top of the pilothouse, rigging for the mast and flaglines, coolwater exhausts on the hull, hoisting points if the ship is to be hoisted on board of another ship, waterline markers, anchor gear, lights, identification on the hull..... while this drawing is of the size where it starts getting complicated what to draw and what to ignore, real ships have tons of details that could be drawn on. Getting practise with stuff like that is one of the reasons why we always recommend drawing real ships for the first few drawings. The smallest ship in shipbucket is still 5 times shorter then this drawing though!
- 150+ ton cranes in the WW2 era are quite big, are you sure you want those on a battleship? and not even speaking about the weight of the ship itself on your hull. We're talking in the range of choosing between having 2 of these boats on board or having secondary armament on your battleship even if your ship is the size of the yamato. and if these are designed for oceanic operations, why would you bring them on your battleship?