Welcome to the Shipbucket!
Unfortunately, I can't really say anything positive about Your drawing.
First of all, it's full of double black lines and heavy corners. Second, it has no shading while at the same time it's horribly lacking details. Thirdly, the wheels aren't really circles, the caption is anti-aliased and last but not least the producer's leaflet mentions the overall length of 6000 mm, and Yours seems to be somewhat longer, which raises question about scaling and/or accuracy.
I hope it won't discourage You from participation in our community and from attempting to improve Your talents.
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