Shipbucket

All my current SB scale ship's that I was advised to place in the beginners forum. All you tallented folks can rip them apart.

1. USA/real/naval aux.


2. USA/real/naval aux.


3. USA/real/naval aux.


4. USA/real/naval aux.


5. USA/real/amphibious warfare


6. USA/real/naval aux.


7. USA/real/naval aux.


8. USA/never-built/ampbib. warfare


9. USA/never-built/amphib. warfare


10. USA/real/naval aux.

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A.K.A. Das_Schlemm


Worklist:
FD Scale USN/USMC/USCG Aircraft
SB Scale USN Ships
Trainbucket Anthracite Railroads

Especially within the context of the beginner section, it would be helpful to know what you've changed. For example, the LHA-8 drawing is pretty busy. What comments should we be giving you, and what comments should we be giving the original author?

LHA-8 was given the new island design and the sponson forward of the island. Everything else was unchanged.

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A.K.A. Das_Schlemm


Worklist:
FD Scale USN/USMC/USCG Aircraft
SB Scale USN Ships
Trainbucket Anthracite Railroads

Welcome aboard.

These are very interesting additions.
Style wise the main points are; don't forget the shadow shading underneath all overhangs and platforms, all plaforms and overhanging decks should be 3 pixels thick (black-colour-black) and don't forget any small details (deck equipment etc.) that could reduce the empty appearance of some sections of these ships.
Also some of your drawings have a weird cut-off hull look. Generally in SB we either draw to the waterline (the black boot topping) or all of the underwater hull, a couple of your drawings are showing some underwater hull and upper rudders but then cut-off.

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Hood's Worklist
English Electric Canberra FD
Interwar RN Capital Ships
Super-Darings
Never-Were British Aircraft

Great work!

anyway, i think that Bougainville will incorporate the Enterprise Air Surveillance Radar (EASR) volume air search radar in lieu of the AN/SPS-48G air search radar