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Thanks!

I'll give it a hint of brown color.

They are dark blue but I can make the blue color a little lighter.

what about this sail color? Or should it be a little more brown?

personally, I think these are perfect.

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When i sailed on her.
The outer lines of her sails where more brighter then the inner.
This is maby because of some air exhaust pipes on the front (They are cooking in the ship, and that goes out in that position).
Also she contains many robes on the sails itself.
So you can pull it up. Maby add those aswell as detail?

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robes? you mean the reefing lines?
btw, I hope to see some more detail on the stern and on the decks... she looks a bit empty now.

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I like the color of the sails but I would add some shades on the sails.
I don't like too much the hull shading: I guess that you used a single curved line but I would suggest to work on aft and on bow separately, using just one pixel in the middle of the hull. BTW this is only a personal comment without having the view of the real hull.

PS: such a ship requires a "more important" flag!

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Dont forget her Net in the forward peek.
Its an awesome place to sit

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I would change the sails outline. Black is too dominating considering that it's sheets of fabric we're working with.
You seem to have most of the rigging down, except from a few wires on the mizzen, though I would change the colour of the "steps" on the side stays. DPs Warrior will show you what I mean.

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Thiel. The steps to the top masts are black.

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