That's a better design, yes.
Incidentally, you might be interested to see
here where the Wesworld Argentine player (Hood) ordered a German-designed and built battlecruiser class.
Thank you guys for your really useful replies. I wish all forummates would give that qualified answers. I see, the design is really not that easy as I thought. While I won't redo it lets fire and forget it.
You're welcome. I feel a helpful response is better than a sneering one (although I've been accused of being sardonic even when I'm trying to be helpful... eh well...)
I don't think the design is entirely invalid. Like with Rodney and Nelson, it allows for a shorter armor belt, plus the Japanese did this a lot, particularly with Tone which most outright resembles this ship. It doesn't have to appease British design (they were never operationally satisfied with this design anyway) but it could be considered experimental.
Tone has a longer, less weighed-down aft deck which is dedicated to aircraft catapults; the greatest portion of her weight is forward and amidships. I believe Tone had several issues with the placement of her concentrated armament causing severe strain on the hull particularly in heavy seas.