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is this ship any good of is it bad ship.

I'm no expert for ocean liners, so I can't give you any proper critics. But personaly I like the design and the drawing so far.

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thanks i work hard on it, and i have some more in the works.

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Work list: 1. various pre-1900 Zipang ships 2. Some protected cruisers and other miscellaneous projects

This might be quite a good drawing! have you drawn her from the ground up or did you use parts from ships other people have drawn?

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i draw the Shape of the hull and bow, i used some Decks and some windows from some other ships to make the b deck promenade. the Shape of the stern, i copy from a another ship. the funnels i draw my self,
the bridge is copy from a another ship.

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which name should i use for a AU i'm making. should i use the kantai islands or Republic of Yokosuka.

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Welcome aboard, ant it's nice to see a new guy working on a creditable ocean liner as a first drawing.
The ship has some very good points in her design, but a ship of this size would have 4 or the very least 3 propellers.
I would also lower the lifeboats one deck, and lower the entire superstructure by one deck.
Portholes on the hull sides are too evenly spaced and they extend too much towards both bow and stern
If your ship is pre-war (before WW2 that is) she would have more derricks and cargo handling gear, both on the stern, and on the bows.
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I would also change the underwater hull to red or green. Blue was not used in the pre-war era (assuming this is your time line)

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Very nice work!

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Parts from my old Mauretania drawing I see.

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i made some changes in her design, i lower the entire superstructure by one deck and i added more derricks and cargo handling gear.

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Work list: 1. various pre-1900 Zipang ships 2. Some protected cruisers and other miscellaneous projects