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Post subject: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 21st, 2011, 8:42 pm
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I will post here all newdrawn enforcer never builds. references (especially lengths and sideviews) are welcome.
first of all, the 24000, the last LHD of this line (the concepts for the johan de witt, LHD 17000, 24000 and 30000)
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Post subject: Re: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 23rd, 2011, 2:25 pm
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Post subject: Re: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 23rd, 2011, 2:56 pm
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There's a double line under the crane and along the top of the vehicle ramp, the platform supports on the masts would look a lot better in three pixel with, there's no shading under the platforms and the stairs aft could use some attention. Right now they look curved.
The cut outs in the hull could do with some heavier shading, and there should also be shaded under the anchor.
There's a gap in the waterline between the aft mast and the RHIB.
Unless the ship is riveted together, we normally don't show panel lines.
The Detailing on the ramp could do with some more contrast, right now it looks like JPEG artefacts unless you zoom in on it.

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Post subject: Re: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 23rd, 2011, 3:08 pm
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Thiel wrote:
There's a double line under the crane and along the top of the vehicle ramp,
nothing to do about it, as these parts should be on exact those positions....
Thiel wrote:
the platform supports on the masts would look a lot better in three pixel with,
I disagree
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there's no shading under the platforms
that's because they aren't that much wider then the mast, but I could add a little shading there.... but only a little.
Thiel wrote:
and the stairs aft could use some attention. Right now they look curved.
I agree
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The cut outs in the hull could do with some heavier shading, and there should also be shaded under the anchor.
no need for it in the cutouts, but I will fix the anchor
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There's a gap in the waterline between the aft mast and the RHIB.
will fix
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Unless the ship is riveted together, we normally don't show panel lines.
the ship looked very empty without them, and recently some ships have them added... (like Miho's LCF) so I thought it would be ok....... but I can remove them if needed, can an admin please make clear if that should be done?
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The Detailing on the ramp could do with some more contrast, right now it looks like JPEG artefacts unless you zoom in on it.
will fix, but couldn't you have said that earlier? I have to fix it on 5 ships now already -.-

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Post subject: Re: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 23rd, 2011, 3:37 pm
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all ships of the enforcer series that needed fixes:
any other comments?
most likely I will post the LPD 15000 tonight.

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Post subject: Re: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 23rd, 2011, 4:01 pm
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I'd raise the crane instead of lowering it, so that it doesn't merge with the superstructure.
The shading is of course up to you, but on my monitor at least, I can hardly see it unless I zoom in on it.

As for the ramp, I haven't really looked all that much on this thread since I don't like the Enforcer designs.

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Post subject: Re: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 23rd, 2011, 4:24 pm
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The Enforcer 11000 LPD design still lacking some MINOR details (bridge level details, island, ect...)


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Post subject: Re: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 23rd, 2011, 4:27 pm
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there still need to be added some lights on it, otherwise it is finished IMO.... island?

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Post subject: Re: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 23rd, 2011, 4:29 pm
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The LPD misses a lot of details.
Look at the Rotterdam/JDW for the details.
You can not miss them!

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Post subject: Re: schelde (damen) enforcer seriesPosted: March 23rd, 2011, 4:30 pm
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details like what? this ship isn't one of those, so I cannot say it will have exactly the same....

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