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Realy nice work Novice

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The Kingdom of Rochfort in FD

That looks nice, Novice, plus the subject looks obscure enough and was probably hard to document.
Couple of nitpick though, if I may:
- Some of the pulleys on the cranes have no visible links to the crane arms, particularly the leftmost one.
- The top of the front mast looks like a duplicated black line.
- Are the dark grey slits on the hull side meant to be outflow cut-outs on bridge level? If so, what is there to see behind that is dark grey like that?
- Are the tarps without a black outline within SB standard? The shrouds are OK AFAIK, but the rest I haven't seen that often yet.
- Is the broken bow line based on a nearly-but-not-completely straight bow? Otherwise if the bow is straight, you may have an alignment problem.

Overall a great job!

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Traditionally great work.

Russian steamship Orel (II), 1909, Dobrovolnyi Flot

A very nice drawing olekit24, but I think that the credit line of the ship should read like this "Russia, SS Orel 1909" and below "Dobrovolnyi Flot" and below that your name.

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Thank you Kim for the crest

"Never fear to try on something new. Remember that the Titanic was built by professionals, and the Ark by an amateur"

Ok, thanks. I've change it. moreover there are some mistake with dimentions of the ship....

really good looking ship and drawing

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I have changed the drawing a little. Now I's true Orel (II) )))

Nice work.

Very nice work!

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