Shipbucket

Famous last words.
It's a good drawing, but there's still a few things that needs attention
The anchor is solid black and frankly doesn't look very good.
There's some black blobs around the containers that are easy to remove. And should be.
The railings are the wrong colour. Unless the railings aren't greyish they should be the standard colour which is Red: 173 Green: 173 Blue: 173

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Standards can be good, but when rails aren't red or green or blue (or grey) it will give the ship a non-real look! Some times compromises have to be taken. It's already a compromise using standard rails but fortunately it doesn't spoil the image, but wrong colours will
The black blobs I have to correct (and I will )

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Work in progress:
DD County Class PNS Babur (1982)(PAK)
FF Type 21 Class D182 PNS Babur (2000)(PAK)
All relevant Coat of Arms

Hi Thiel I will guess you have to clean your monitor screen. I couldn't find any black blobs

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Work in progress:
DD County Class PNS Babur (1982)(PAK)
FF Type 21 Class D182 PNS Babur (2000)(PAK)
All relevant Coat of Arms

Black blobs and double lines are circled in red, stuff that needs an outline in green.
I did a bit experimenting and they are all easily removed, but I'll let it be up to you how you want to do it.

And never use black when shading.

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Hmmm Except of the two exhaust endings I can't see any problems. With all double lines I've used a dark (okay it's very dark) grey on the one and black on the other. I haven't made any shading with black. Maybe you're referring to the rope holes, which actually are black painted on the edge. Again I used dark grey. I'm speculating if it have something with Photobucket to do. There are also a yellow vertical line in top of the left crane house. That line isn't on my original. I think I'm doing something wrong with PB, because I also got problems with my Albion Class uploading. I just can't figure out what
I have to attach my drawing here so you can compare. Sorry to waste space on the server

Oops! I nearly forgot the exhaust's

Image removed! New (and corrected) at page 5

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Work in progress:
DD County Class PNS Babur (1982)(PAK)
FF Type 21 Class D182 PNS Babur (2000)(PAK)
All relevant Coat of Arms

Your problem might be using a wider colour scale than the file format supports, so when you save it Photoshop just converts it to the closest colour available.

Oh and it looks much better.

One more thing, the fairleads (Klyds) lacks an outline in the middle (Inline)

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“Close” only counts with horseshoes, hand grenades, and tactical nuclear weapons.
That which does not kill me has made a grave tactical error

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Source Materiel is always welcome.

Listen to this guy ^^^

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Worklist: Portuguese Navy and Barnegat class seaplane tenders

In other words, write the the name with "standard" letters.

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“Close” only counts with horseshoes, hand grenades, and tactical nuclear weapons.
That which does not kill me has made a grave tactical error

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Source Materiel is always welcome.

Few points.

1. Like said, no need to place cyrilic letters on the sheet, just follow the normal practice.
2. grey mast WTF?? Only use grey for really, really thin lines like antennas and railings. Not anything supporting or fixed structure.
3. Hull shading in the stern is wrong, as it is in the technical point of view in the underwater part.

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Shipbucket mainsite, aka "The Archive"
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Thanks to you all. Off course the klyds should the dark grey and the black be reversed, so now it fixed
Okay, name in latin letters. Hope it's ok to keep the kyrilian spelling in brackets?
Oh yes the mast ... What would you propose? I've tried with black outlining. Then it became to clumsy. Then I've tried with black lines only. Then she have a total wrong expression. In fact the lattice? (barred?) mast is plain white in reality. You may have experinced such a case earlier. How did you then solve that problem?

P.S. I have changed the attachment above

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Work in progress:
DD County Class PNS Babur (1982)(PAK)
FF Type 21 Class D182 PNS Babur (2000)(PAK)
All relevant Coat of Arms