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That's nice You've made that attempt, but I have a feeling that it has way too much black lines (they generally represent only sharp edges), while in some places they are missing (like the windscreen, mirrors and door hinges).

The cab is the same as the ZIL-131 on the archive?

I've made a version with the suggested edits, save for the black on the side mirror as I feel it looks worse.



And here's the other one to compare with.

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Ooops! (apparently because of the Archived's ZIL's camo painting I didn't notice certain features there)
But in that case we have another problem: lack of Caddaric79 in the credits.
I'd still suggest making the mirror strut if not black, then at least much darker, as in that color it's just fading into background (meaning the cabin). That said, I'm bit puzzled why on both versions (Your's and Caddaric's) the door window is not outlined in black, but the metal shape just below the window is.
EDIT: as for the hinges - maybe not exactly drawing them all black, just making at some (proper) place the line where the cabin "ends" and door "begins".

I've made the mirror support much darker and fixed the credits.

I actually think the hinges look better outlined, rather than not.

I have also fixed the black line on the cab where there should have been a dark blue line.(under the window)

I have also drawn a ZIL-133.

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Ok, lets get back on Made in YU trucks

Here is the TAM 130T11 B model, a model that introduced new type of cab-over engine with Maribor automobile factory (TAM) truck models. Also there is a bus made on the TAM 130 chassis, the TAM 130 A8 (with bodywork made by TAM) and TAM 130 A85 (with bodywork made by Autokaroserija from Novi Sad).
These trucks and buses have been also used by military.

Excellent series!

FANTASTIC work Nestin

Well Done Matey

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Awesome work as always Nestin, especially on the buses.

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Thanks It was a fun to make those buses

Keep it up! Now I wait for TAM-5000