Well, all the critiques seem to be in so thanks a lot for your input. I have made most of the changes suggested and present a redux of
Galatea rather than a revision of the original. The link to her sister,
Australia was especially useful and enabled me to re-work the 6-inch guns. I am holding back on the hull shading; not being possessed of a body plan, I would be in danger of giving an inaccurate representation of the hull form so here is her final rendering: