That looks nice for sure. Great drawing, nice looking ship overall.
The color I find particularly interesting, with some outstanding relief shading here and there.
Now, for the post-Soviet side of things... *cracks knuckles* from the top of all my 2 months experience drawing post-Soviet AU ships in SB format, here's what I can add to make this look more Soviet (if I understand you right and that's the goal):
- What's with the fire-director radars? You have one Puma over the bridge, which goes with the A-190 gun turret, and then an MR-123 just in front? That would be for the AK-630, but is it necessary?
- Also, isn't the Puma backwards?
- Might be worth it swapping the Garpun and Pozitiv radars for a better detection range against air targets? That's a matter of mission, really.
- You have two home-brewed SAM systems but not a single guidance radar? Do all your SAMs have active guidance?
- Simple matter of drawing standard, but if the first missile (*8) on the right is a VLS-launched SAM, shouldn't it be drawn vertical?
- Wouldn't it make more sense to have two separate VLS cells for the same missile type instead of mixing 2 systems?
- Is there enough space on top of the helo hangar for a VLS? Even if your missiles are cold-launch, that looks like a tight fit for a Ka-27 under there. Also, launching missiles right behind the stack?
- Where is the ECM suite? The main mast should be bristling with bulbs and cylinders for the ESM and jammers.
- Is the tube box on the stern an RBU or a chaff launcher?
- If the double line on the transom the door for a towed-array sonar? If so, the machinery would probably take up all of the volume below the helo deck, leaving no open space.
A couple of general design remarks, Soviet or not:
- You could do with deeper blast cutouts behind the Uran tubes, as it is you only take up the two top tubes of each quad.
- The panel sidings on the bridge wings look like they block the view from the bridge to the sides. You can probably cut them down or bring them back to the level of the bridge further aft.
We might come back to the topic of post-Soviet ships once I stop procrastinating and post what I have on it. There's probably going to be some evolutionary convergence at play on small frigates like this one