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The Type 3 Chi-Nu was a tank designed in 1943 and produced by 1944 by the Empire of Japan against allied forces, specifically to counter the American M4 Sherman. 55 Chi-Nu were manufactured in 1944 and 89 Chi-Nu were manufactured in 1945, making a total of 144 Chi-Nu in all. The Chi-Nu inherited many properties from it's predecessor, the Type 97 Chi-Ha, including suspension. The Type 3 Chi-Nu was the last Japanese tank modeled directly off of the Type 97. Its main weaponry was a 75mm Type 3 Tank Gun, its secondary a 7.7 mm Type 97 machine gun. The Type 3 Chi-Nu weighed twenty one tons.

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Sooooo many things wrong with it.
Ill start with these two:
Almost no black lines present.
The colors are off as hell, it looks like it was painted in crayons

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Thank you for your input sir,
I will take your suggestions into account and adjust the drawing as such, and will update the post when I fix it.

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I however would much appreciate if you were to continue your list so I may work on it all at once, rather than wait for the next set. Thank you sir

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One thing I can spot other than what Radome, track should be thicker than that, take a look at how others have done the tracks, there's a little trick to it which gives a good track in return, involved a pattern on connected "U" shapes

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Thank you so much, I'm on it

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Here is a picture showing your tank comparing to other tanks drawn by diffrent members of this forum.

The best advice i can give you is just see how others did it.
Look how tracks should look, look where should be a black line and where shouldn't.
Look where shade should be applied, look at the colors used.
And the first rule of any drawing here - FD or SB, try to avoid double black lines.
If you still have trouble doing it yourself, PM me and I will help you personally.

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If it helps, I have the Chi-Ha/Chi-To mostly complete so I can finish them up today-ish so you can use them as a base for the Chi-Nu and Chi-Nu Kai if you want.

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You're all very helpful, thank you

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