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phu2000
Post subject: Damen CrossoverPosted: April 29th, 2015, 10:40 am
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Crossover is Damen latest naval vessels family

these include :

Crossover 139 Fast Combatant, 139m, 5600t
Crossover 131 Combatant, 131m, 5300t
Crossover 131 Amphibious, 131m, 5500t
Crossover 131 Logistic, 131m, 5500t
Crossover 123 Fast Security, 123m, 5000t
Crossover 115 Security, 115m, 4500t

(i don't know what SAM she have in those VLS, so i left it as blank)
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still need some details, but i'm not sure with the position and size (and i use different color)

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acelanceloet
Post subject: Re: Damen CrossoverPosted: April 29th, 2015, 3:25 pm
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nice start..... a few points come up in my mind though.
quite nice! a few comments:
- the mast looks fatter on the render then on your drawing
- the circular part on the mast looks like the IFF from the I-mast, you might be able to copy that from the existing drawing of that
- the bridge equipment looks off.
- the radar you have drawn on the bridge wing is most likely an oto melara hitrole
- I think the paintscheme would be that of the dutch navy ships. at least the superstructure grey is, I am not certain about the lower hull colour.
- the underwater hull needs some work, try to work with the hull shading rules (ask me if you need help ;) ) it might be best to do a check of the above the water hull shading too, while you're at it.
- I miss the wavebreaker and small structure under the gun and VLS.
- cut out that shading inder the satcoms at the side, and shade those shipbucket standard :P
- you have the bridge wing lines drawn with dark grey, but the hangar lines (which are the same angle) in black. those should be grey, as well.

other then that, quite nice!

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phu2000
Post subject: Re: Damen CrossoverPosted: April 29th, 2015, 3:59 pm
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oops, wrong light direction :oops:

thanks for comment! i will fix those :D

p.s. i've some parts that i don't know the credit, how can i find the name of drawer?


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acelanceloet
Post subject: Re: Damen CrossoverPosted: April 29th, 2015, 4:04 pm
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parts do never require credit, if you found them on part sheets. if you took parts from other ships, you can find the names of the authors on their template, but that is only done if it really was a copy-pase of for example a hangar or mast or other big part.

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sebu
Post subject: Re: Damen CrossoverPosted: April 29th, 2015, 4:05 pm
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Good work Phu! Single parts don't require crediting ;) It's yours...
edit: I was a minute late :D You're too fast Ace


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phu2000
Post subject: Re: Damen CrossoverPosted: April 29th, 2015, 4:50 pm
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maybe like this? :D .....still not sure with shading, especially underwater...

missile still blank...
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superboy
Post subject: Re: Damen CrossoverPosted: May 3rd, 2015, 6:09 am
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Great drawing phu2000, i think you need to show largest helicopter that flight deck support. :mrgreen:


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