Damon class battleships, the first of Lothringenese big gun sea giants
So you are building a alt Lord Nelson class (may I ask if have gone straight from sails or are there anything in-between ? if not it will be very hard to do !) (IMO I would add a few AC growing bigger by each class of 2 build beforehand )
OK, I will do something about that soon.
Ten of these warships were commissioned between 1905 to 1920.
Nobody will lay down new post HMS dreadnought (well not after 2/3 years so 1910 max !) (and 20 is huge numbers, go with 2,4,max 6 ?)
What I meant here was that they were in serviced from 1905 to 1920 not they were brought into service from 1905 to 1920
Apart from that I like it for a 1905 LD ships (I would go for 2) for a not top tech navy that gets finished 1908-10 kept in service till 1918 (maybe buy a Dreadnought post war for scrap price or maybe you have already build some later in 1910+)
What I meant was the ships saw service from 1905 to 1920. They were not introduced into the navy from 1905 to 1920.