That's looking a lot better B.B.
Might I suggest updating the funnels to maybe 2 instead of 3 and use something like the Amphions for straight ones, or if you want to try the angled ones as per the plan, use a Southampton/Belfast funnel. That would bring everything together into the same timespan, funnels, bridge, guns.
Well, two funnels did come to mind, it'll require some jiggery pokery though. I'd rather keep to the straight funnels as they fit better with the later design IMO.