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Hong Jun Roh
Post subject: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 19th, 2011, 8:12 pm
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This is first time to draw a ship, so please understand my position.

Maybe there are a lot of mistakes and I couldn't follow your rules perfectly since my english isn't strong. If you are ok, please, check my ship.

These is no KDX-1(south korean navy) Class in Shipbucket, so i drew it.

When i found out this site, I surprised and excited because of your drawings. so nice!
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Post subject: Re: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 19th, 2011, 8:16 pm
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it is not bad at all!
few comments: ugly propeller, outdated goalkeeper and oto 127 drawings (but you didn't knew there were newer ones, so that is no problem, just change it :P ) and you need to credit yourself and the authors you have taken parts from (if any) on the drawing, according to the templates.
btw, I guess you are south korean yourself?

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Post subject: Re: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 19th, 2011, 8:33 pm
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Welcome Aboard :D , and great to have a new member from South Korea (maybe our only one so far). As a first project she looks fine, but I can't comment yet on the finer detail; and no need to credit others for parts, we only share credits when adapting existing drawings :)


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Hong Jun Roh
Post subject: Re: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 19th, 2011, 9:00 pm
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comparison with this picture.
Actually, I couldn't type my name and some information in 'Arial 10' in my com.
Thank you for your comments, And I'll change ASAP.

On my drawing, I've taken most of parts from KDX-2 CLASS(MCorads) in shipbuket.
And sorry but I can't understand correctly what does 'credits' mean. :shock:

I understood that 'credits' means parts from your drawings. Am i right?


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Post subject: Re: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 19th, 2011, 10:29 pm
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Nice drawing :D 'Credits' are basically when you take an allready drawn ship and change or improve it. Then the original drawers name shall stand there before your own name :D

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Post subject: Re: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 19th, 2011, 10:30 pm
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Good start in the forum ! :D

Greetings. ;)

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Post subject: Re: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 20th, 2011, 2:52 am
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It is a very good first drawing - much better than my initial effort. You have good attention to detail (example: red lines on torpedo tubes, enlarged illuminators). I look forward to seeing your work improve.


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Post subject: Re: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 20th, 2011, 5:21 am
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Excellent start, helluva lot better than my first, keep it up!

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Post subject: Re: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 20th, 2011, 9:20 am
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I understood that 'credits' means parts from your drawings. Am i right?
Credits means basicly who drawn the ship. We use rather simple method to credit the artist in our drawings, by placing the name under the name of the ship in brackets.
If you drew it all alone from the start, then you credit only you self. If you "kitbash" eq. use parts of other's drawings or had someone to co-work with you, then you credit them as well after your name under the ship's name.
If you modify existing drawing, then you add your own name after the orginal artist name.

If you use Paint, then the font sizes should be 11 for the ship and 9 for the name (otherwise follow the template instructions.)

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Post subject: Re: kdx-1 class (south korean navy)Posted: February 20th, 2011, 1:31 pm
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Hong Jun Roh, that's a great start. The only change I can spot is that the screw guard (the structure aft above the water line that prevents the ship from getting to close to structures like walls that would be bad for the screw to hit) should have a flat bottom (like you see on DG/AEGIS here). I think you angled it because the side view there is above the plane that the guard lies in, and as such you get some viewing angle distortion.
Gollevainen wrote:
If you use Paint, then the font sizes should be 11 for the ship and 9 for the name (otherwise follow the template instructions.)
Really? I was using 10-10.5 for the large text and 7.5-8 for the small.

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