Technical questions on your shading settings:
1) Software Package used?
2) How many color steps are you set for?
For my "SB Style" drawings I set mine for 64 steps. For non-SB stuff I'm generally around 128 +/- steps but can go a lot higher for really smooth transitions but that's a wast in pixel art. I use Corel Graphics Suite for all my basic drawing set ups.
I Use MS Paint only, I try to make the drawing as FD standard as possible but its so hard to make a proper shade on a sub this way.
I used 8 steps. all drawn by hand.
Drawing Technique Observation:
Would you consider using less dark fills?? Try using less "black" blacks on fill so panel lines show up. Try using a very dark gray for your deepest color (20-30% less deep).
CraigH
I'll look into that on my next drawing. but as i said before i try to make it FD-Standard as possible and follow FD rules.