Interesting concept (with quite unusual, IMHO, location of 40mm's). And nice initiative with making an update.
Thanks.
It looks washed out and bad in my opinion, almost as if it was run through a Photoshop (or Instagram) filter.
I can see where you think it looks washed out, but I think that is mostly because the red isn't so darn bright.
What is an "art pass?"
As Heuhen says, an art pass is when you make no structural changes to a drawing, but you do make minor parts and color updates.
One problem with the "newest part" philosophy is that the intricately detailed updated parts can look badly out of place on a drawing not done to the current exacting standards of Shipbucket. Most noticeable on the Ikara launcher here.
Eh, I did this for me, and after sharing with the IRC room, I decided to share it with everyone.