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Here are these lines fine?

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French Vice-admiral Louis-René-Madeleine Le Vassor de La Touche, comte de Tréville
The original spelling of my last name is: LaTouche.

Okay Bezo,

Is this what you meant?

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French Vice-admiral Louis-René-Madeleine Le Vassor de La Touche, comte de Tréville
The original spelling of my last name is: LaTouche.

The platforms look great ( though check the aft mast's platforms again )

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"Loitering on the High Seas" (Named after the good ship Rodondo)
There's no such thing as "nothing left to draw" If you can down 10 pints and draw, you're doing alright by my standards

Oops,

Now?

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French Vice-admiral Louis-René-Madeleine Le Vassor de La Touche, comte de Tréville
The original spelling of my last name is: LaTouche.

I cont see anything amiss on this superb drawing, though USN Ship aren't my area so I'll leave the detailed look over to those who do know the ship

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How to mentally pronounce my usernameRow-(as in a boat)Don-(as in the short form of Donald)Dough-(bread)
"Loitering on the High Seas" (Named after the good ship Rodondo)
There's no such thing as "nothing left to draw" If you can down 10 pints and draw, you're doing alright by my standards

Its fine for me - exept you should clean the conning tower, its still sort of mess between various shades of grey that aren't actually shading anything. Try to do them same way as the gun rings (presuming the conning tower is round?) Otherwise Its good. You could perhaps color the platforms with the hull color rather than with the dark grey to give more balanced contrast

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Okay Golly,

I hope you don't mind the informality of address . . . is this alright?

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French Vice-admiral Louis-René-Madeleine Le Vassor de La Touche, comte de Tréville
The original spelling of my last name is: LaTouche.

No proplems for me, You guys can call me what ever you want. Golly is the mostly used acronyme for me after misspelled gollevainen.

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Excellent work and well worth all the revisions and edits.

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English Electric Canberra FD
Interwar RN Capital Ships
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Never-Were British Aircraft

O-o-ps, I seem to have belated. Let's go back to BB18 USS Connecticut 1906. I do not pretend to particularly accurate but if you wish you can see the link below.
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4cch5zuwjhygq ... Latush.rar


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