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Post subject: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 12th, 2014, 11:20 pm
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So I am working on an AU ship and I got the hull laid :).

I am open for suggestion as this is my first dedicated design.

This is it so far.

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Rodondo
Post subject: Re: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 12th, 2014, 11:54 pm
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I'd recommend lowering the height overall by a bit, certainly bring the superstructure down by at least 30-40%, as from what I gather from the scale, it's far too top heavy

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Post subject: Re: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 13th, 2014, 12:00 am
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It would help if we now what it's supposed to do.

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heuhen
Post subject: Re: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 13th, 2014, 12:00 am
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some small points before I go to bed!:

- create an waterline, it will help you a lot.
- decide how big you want it.
- decide what task it shall do.
- find all parts you need, and place them out so you can see if they fit.
- when choosing role for the ship, look at other similar vessels for help.


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klagldsf
Post subject: Re: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 13th, 2014, 1:56 am
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Newb wrote:
This is it so far.
...literally 90 seconds in MSPaint? You might want to develop it a tad more.


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Radome
Post subject: Re: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 13th, 2014, 2:01 am
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right now it looks like an origami boat...
Shape it alittle, give it some color, use the tips heuhen gave you.
After that you will hear some serious advice and criticism, right now its nothing realy...

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Post subject: Re: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 13th, 2014, 2:15 am
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I know its nothing right now.

Also I didn't spend 90 seconds in MS Paint, I spent quite some time trying to form the shape.


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Post subject: Re: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 13th, 2014, 2:17 am
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klagldsf wrote:
Newb wrote:
This is it so far.
...literally 90 seconds in MSPaint? You might want to develop it a tad more.
This is his first drawing - please be a little bit nicer and offer some helpful criticism rather than just a snipe.

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Post subject: Re: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 13th, 2014, 2:18 am
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Well then he should, you know, offer an actual drawing instead of just a literal outline.


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Rodondo
Post subject: Re: AU Ship ProgressPosted: March 13th, 2014, 2:32 am
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To be honest, it's a nice change from the MY UBER BATTLSHIP PWNS LOL genre we get all to often

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