Nice work!
I'd add shading below the horizontal stabilizer (also there looks like the already existing shading there ends quite abruptly where that undertail bulge is), also I don't quite like the wing's trailing edge which looks bit fuzzy to me.
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The only suggestions I could make would be to refine the shape of the engine nacelles (the rear end could be better rounded/blended) and get started on some paint schemes. Look at existing FD scale Luftwaffe drawing for colour palettes and inspiration. Well done!
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BTW Imperialist: I'm quite sure the outer engine nacelle of the He343 did not stick out farther forward than the inner one, they were exactly parallel.
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The MAD is too heavy to place on the horizontal stabilzer, there is no need for search radar under the front fuselage when there is one already in the nose. That space can be netter use for weapon/sensor bay.
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He's going on what little published information / renders there are for it and considering that those feature both a tail mounted probe (unclear whether it is a MAD or not) and fuselage mounted radar fairing I'm inclined to say leave it as is.
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